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[Shift. Control.]

Kewl.

In short, the beginning part was awesome but the rest of the song doesn't quite live up to it. I love those chords in the pad you used, and combining it with that clap and hihat sounds great. I don't quite get the shift/control thing, but it sounds cool haha.
Once it quieted down, I kept waiting for it to come out into a big hit with maybe a tempo increase. It did change, but it took too long. The last part needs a little work I think, you did imply that this was a work in progress so I think you should add a lead synth in there carrying a melody. And instead of having it build for a couple bars then go back down a few times, the whole thing should be building the whole time up until where the song ends now. And then for that ending you're talking about... I don't know haha just make it sound cool, you clearly have the skill.

So I probably over-did that. But I'm really hearing a lot of cool stuff in this, and I'd like to hear it when you've put that ending on it. Shoot me a PM when you finish it :D

totojimbob responds:

Thanks for the review : )
Thanks for the advice, I might shorten the middle part. The majority of work I've got left to do on this is the lead synth at the end. I really like the -pause-kick- section, but I need to look to add a melody from there. I'll be sure to shoot you a PM if I ever get this finished, as I have an awful of leaving works in progress unfinished. Once again, thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot.
--totojimbob

[forgive me ckc]

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orlandobloomington responds:

your a fucking retard

[Lost in Numbers]

Nice little song

The intro was a little too long for me, being what it is. Other than that, it was simple-simply relaxing =) It's just a pleasurable listening experience XP

Tysuru responds:

Intro was almost half the song, so I dont blame you. But thank you =]

[The Day We Won]

Sounds great

Definitely continue this. It sounds great, like one of those "story songs" that progress like a story. The only thing I would change is the reverb on the piano, the way it echoes with the beat like that makes it sound unrealistic. Not saying take it off altogether just turn down the reverb volume a little.

fizhbone responds:

Yeah man thanx :) but its called a Dream Piano that Plugin i used, and its the hole idea, but i will try to turn it down a bit, c what i get out of that thanx !

[Summer Days in F Major]

Basically what he said.

I just got a midi cord off of amazon.com for 8 bucks lol they're not that expensive, and that would change the sound of this so much for the better. Great job!

Pandaguru responds:

Yeah 8 bucks isn't bad at all. Thanks for the review!

[~ Canon Piano Improvisati]

Inspiring

Hey, it is inspiring! Thanks for this!

Generally I agree with what everyone's said so far about it, but one thing I'd like to add that's small, I think the lead that comes in at 0:34 for a bit is genius!

Catstuffer responds:

lol, yea, lots of controversy over that lead... lol Thanks for reviewing!

Glad you like it

[~ Siege of Madrigal ~]

Sweet.

Like pezmobile said, this could just be the intro to some other full song (definitely perfect for a trance though).
If you do expand on it, make sure to spell Siege right ;)

Catstuffer responds:

oops! lol! Thanks for pointing that out! :/
I will fix that right after reponding!

Thanks for ur review! I hope I can make something good out of it!

[\Escape From Alcatraz/]

Great, but...

Add the hip hop beat a little later, once the theme is more developed, and the low strings at the beginning when they change notes it kind of has this "skippy" feel to it... I was thinking "this will be epic" and then it changed notes and it felt like it choked... no big deal, just a small thing that would make people not have picky comments like this =]

Adamaja456 responds:

haha well thank you for your honesty, its much appreciated :)

[Give me a Break]

Nice

If you were to look at the music on paper... You'd think it would be very repetitive, but it doesn't sound that way. It's inviting and bright throughout. 9/10 4/5

Psycedelic responds:

Yeah, it's so repetitive! I shoulda done something to improve it >_<.

Thanks for the nice words! Kick ass review! :)
-Psych-

[PJC- Catrosity]

uhm...

What's with the voice at the beginning... then the other voice talking about hair products...

Cats?

Mmk... I get it...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA lol

SolarMoth responds:

Thanks, glad someone didn't take this song too seriously.

Check out our other song, Randomosity, it's even better!