paradimensional's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hall of the mountin king or so]

uhh

Front page? It consisted of mostly the first two bars, with a bit more in 3 or 4 places... lol

But it's a good remix aside from the sounds and repetitiveness...

[Nightmare1128]

lol...

Weird how this made it to the top 30, isn't it? Just an experimental "oh well, here it is" piece... Nothing special, nothing bad. I give it a ten anyways lol =)

[Rain - Fuchuzz]

I wouldn't have taken out the bells.

The bells were a nice touch, I missed them when they went away, and when they came back it just filled out the piece more =) If you haven't noticed by my other reviews I'm quite picky =P and the little things bother me... and so would the big things, but large flaws are absent from your music. Congrats man =D

P.S. ending doesn't quite fit for the type of music this is, it's too techno-y if you know what I mean, it sounds like it could almost be a lead-in to a fast and bass pumping techno part. Again, it's the little things =)

fuchuzz responds:

thanks, yea i noticed your other review, but please be as picky as you want , that way my music will evolve, thanks for th review, and i completely agree with the ending ,it does feel out of place.

[Gates of Wood - Fuchuzz]

I couldn't find anything wrong =)

Hehe I was listening for something to tell you to change... couldn't find anything. Like your others, it keeps you drawn in even with such simplistic sounds and beats. Nice and calming. Good work =D

fuchuzz responds:

again, thanks :P,im really glad you like it, ill be sure top post two more tomorrow.

[Factory - Fuchuzz]

Could have been better.

The guitar that comes in in the first few seconds and stays on two notes... would be okay if it was in the background. It gets brought out later as the most prominent part again... on the same two notes... too much. Probably some sort of note progression at the end of every two bars would fix it. The little peeping thing in the last minute... could be less peepy. When it starts doing chords it sounds good though.

Once you get past that guitar it's a really good piece, it draws you in nicely... and keeps you interested for the most part =)

fuchuzz responds:

thank you again, yea i could deffintly change up the guitar in the background, i agree, im glad you enjoyed it.

[Waht is it? - Fuchuzz]

I'm liking this...

Well other than the sound realism, some of those chords are cut off REALLY abruptly... you probably intended that, but it just kind of creates tension, but not the kind you want to have in music. It's probably repetitive lol but it draws you in so much that you wouldn't notice it. I sure didn't. Nice work man =)

fuchuzz responds:

thank you very much good sir, next time i might try to reduce the tension abit then, or make a really good ending.

[PirateCaribbean- He's a Pirate]

Great!!!

This is totally awesome... Sheet music please!!! Even though it was general midi piano it still had its own... charm to it lol, but if this was either recorded or made with a better piano sound it would be absolutely perfect. Still a ten, because not everyone has access to that.

[_-={Day of War}=-_]

GOOSEBUMPS

I almost instantly got goosebumps listening to this... amazing, just amazing... the voice was a good touch, but the only thing I would change: make it a choir, not just a single man, I believe it was... he was singing high too =P

[8bit - The Escaping Escapade]

I like it

You mentioned making another song (Synthetic Systems?) into this one, I think I would enjoy that one more than the 8 bit version, but I can't seem to find it! Could you point me in the right direction?

Anyway, it progresses very well with the melody and lower parts fitting together beautifully. 10/10, 5/5.

IbeSm responds:

Sorry I removed it so that there wouldn't be any confusion between the two.

If you had a deep passion to hear it, PM me and I can upload it on a hosting site for you, but otherwise I am just pointing towards 'nowhere'.

[60 Sec. rock]

hm?

It sounded like you put it together from a bunch of premade loops. Put a little more effort! Some of the loops didn't even fit in.

talls responds:

sorry...